Very heavy. I could feel the breaking of the fall down the mountain. Great imagery here. I came over from One Shot!
great oneshot, andrea. cost of gaining freedom from any tie that binds
Very happy to have found you through oneshot & through bumfuzzled's RT on twitter :-) Very nice work.
Vivid and intense...felt.
Thanks so much for visiting my blog as well as reading and sharing my poetry! I look forward to reading all of yours. I am heading to One Stop Poetry right now. Wishing you all a great day!Smile, Andrea
All I coudl think about after reading this was " Let the rocks and rubblecollect in my mouthin hopes of becomingfossils."I loved the poem bu the image in my mind of a mouthful of rocks while tumbling down was very, very clear. patooey. lol thank you for sharing this poem.
Thank you for your comment, Poets United. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and I'm happy to hear it is staying with you. ;)