Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Ruin in the Franklins

My poem for One-Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry :


Ruin in the Franklins

**I am submitting this piece.  Wish me luck!

7 comments:

  1. Very heavy. I could feel the breaking of the fall down the mountain. Great imagery here. I came over from One Shot!

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  2. great oneshot, andrea. cost of gaining freedom from any tie that binds

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  3. Very happy to have found you through oneshot & through bumfuzzled's RT on twitter :-) Very nice work.

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  4. Thanks so much for visiting my blog as well as reading and sharing my poetry! I look forward to reading all of yours. I am heading to One Stop Poetry right now. Wishing you all a great day!

    Smile, Andrea

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  5. All I coudl think about after reading this was " Let
    the rocks and rubble
    collect in my mouth
    in hopes of becoming
    fossils."

    I loved the poem bu the image in my mind of a mouthful of rocks while tumbling down was very, very clear. patooey. lol thank you for sharing this poem.

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  6. Thank you for your comment, Poets United. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and I'm happy to hear it is staying with you. ;)

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